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Hey can someone check to see if this is correct I have written, but I'm not sure about the grammar. Its supposed to be on my vacation, but I'm quite all because the teacher said we could ....



Normal vacation when I came to the school after week, I thought I would HAVE ONE. Oh la la! I even crime. WHAT IS IT happen ...

I walked a Pizza Hut Pizza A pay big crib when I heard very loud sneeze United Nations. I've seen returns and pigeon J'Ai UN incredibly large portrait Who tuxedo United Nations has increased. I Could Not Believe My Eyes! The pigeon was walking to me and a VID (very strange voice in the UN) "Hello my darling! EC Is What You Want to Feel my perfume?>> It efraye ME and I fled. BUT I ran while Quebec, Que je ne Note I Have No-Portais few clothes! And pui, it initiate a pluevoir! What luck. I was tired, cold, naked and Wet. I started a walk with me When one, of all coup UN, great ape and ME Pick ME A door of a shop. I went in and view All I Have Who could be interested what A Girl, BUT I had no money. Cependent, person I've seen, AND I Have A vole black shirt, white Joupi A, and red shoes. I'm Exited the shop, BUT before I could pay prmener minutes Two silver UN police arrested me. He said "there <There Mandate l'ONU launches lapse capability Against Thee Because That you would run naked in public and you think the vole beaucoup vetements.>> I Have a start and cry I'm in German prison. When I'm coming, I Have A Luxury VU prison he y'avait paintings, sofas, fireplaces, the UN and garden very beautiful. It was heaven I Have Crue Quebec. A very sexy model I leads a master bedroom, BUT I am When the entry, I Have seen The Pigeon Who Carried tuxedo pink! He held the knife and he approached me UN. The BN model could not protect myself and a FUI. The pigeon and Volait to me I do not know what to do. Amen I jumped and I gave it the kick of the UN itself head. Finally, he was dead. Corn EC was not enough! He had the spirit of the UN Monitoring Quebec ME out of prison! Then I sought help pay anyone. A little lady and I Have seen vieulle She told me she could help me. She Give me Five thousand dollars eighty-seven pay A taxi (I do not know pourqoui It was very expensive). Normal afraid I took a taxi cab, but it was not. This Was A taxi van who was white and too large, and the EC had "no windows BUT ONLY Five Three Pour the driver. It is very strange because I-don't-remember nothing after ca. And that was the story of my etraordinaire vacation!

Also, should I do in the past tense verbs female if I talk in first person because I am a girl?

Thank you!

theres a lot of small mistakes but overall its ok

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